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Wednesday, 16 August 2017

Viliami picture book story.

My name is Viliami and I am sick of school. I want to go to out of space. I am going to make my own little space ship. I don't tell anyone where I am going and I just blast off.

10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 BLAST OFF.


Mercury is very close to the very big hot sun, in fact it's the 1st planet closest to the sun.. So this planet is so bad. So I'm blasting off, in my own little space ship.Venus is a very Pretty color but it is just too hot for me. So I'm blasting off, in my own little space ship.

Earth is the 3rd planet. But i’m just gonna just drive past because I’m sick of my school on earth. I'm blasting off, in my own little space ship.Mars is the 5 planet is the solar system. And it is cold at night. So i'm blasting off in my little space ship.

Jupiter is the biggest planet in the solar system. But it is to stormy for me. So I'm blasting off in my little space ship.it is famous because of the ring of the ring around it. Saturn is the sixth planet from the sun. Saturn has a gas giant. But I'm blasting off in my spaceship.

Uranus is cold and around the outside it is icey. It is too cold for me. So i'm blasting off in my little spaceship. Neptune is blue like the smooth sea. Neptune is cold as Ice and water from the sea. Neptune is dark, cold and very windy. it's the last planet in our solar system. It is too cold so I'm blasting off in my little space ship.

I have to return back to earth because I miss school. So kids it is good to love school. I’ve traveled a lot of times so I have to go to earth because that's the only planet I have school at.

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Friday, 11 August 2017

Viliami and Junior - Solar System Rap



 WALT: to write a rap about the order of the planets in our solar system.

During this task of writing a rap Junior and I learnt about the solar system. Mercury is the closest to the sun and there are 8 planets in the solar system.

Viliami Kind.




Task description: It is good to be kind because it is good for the people feelings and it is good to be kind. Some people can show kindness by helping people. they can look after people. And they can share because sharing is caring.

Thursday, 27 July 2017

Viliami Facts about Space

Viliami Space Narrative.

On 4017 me and Junior moved to another planet because the earth was dieing. And it was started to get worse. Because the plants were dying and some to the people in the earth was dieing.

Arriving at our new planet the tiger planet it was scary because there was lots of tigers surrounding. So I had to run. Then I had an Idea I remembered that I had steak in my bag. So I gave him one then he liked it. I fed the tiger that all the steak in my bag that we were going to cook was all finished.

When I ran out of meat I started to get nervous and started shaking. So the tigers started chasing me and I jumped onto my rocket ship and tried to get away but I could not get away. Because the tigers ran and jumped and was on top of our rocket ship. So I knew that there is going to be big trouble.

When the tiger was on top of the roof me and junior climb on top of the rocket and pushed the tigers off the rocket ship. Then we said goodbye to the tigers well they were floating in the air.

After saying goodbye to the tigers Junior and I lived in peace in tiger land. That we had tiger ice cream. And we had fun.



Tuesday, 27 June 2017

Viliami spear fishing.

Walt: think critically about what we read.

Task description:I made slides about spear fishing and I had to chose the right fishing tools.

Wednesday, 21 June 2017

Viliami Newspaper Article octopus.

Walt: think critically about what we read.

Task description: So first I had to read the story then I had to rewrite it and put it in my blog the I made it in google draw.

Tuesday, 9 May 2017

Viliami Fishing Time

Walt: think critically about what we read.



Task description. so all we had to do was to design our lure to look beautiful and to make my story interesting and exciting. I went on are web site to design my lure.

Tuesday, 2 May 2017

Viliami Immersion Assembly

This term team 4 is going to learn about what the Maori people use as technology. We found out at the school immersion assembly. I’m excited!

The whole school's topic is about now that's thinking that is a technology theme. Team 1 - 3 had the same theme making kites. Team 5 is learning about building and creating.

Team 4 is topic is about learning about what the maori people use for technology before the pakeha came. Talking about technology I am talking about what they invented to use. Like making there own fishing rod to get some fish for their family or make there own waka.

I hope to learn and create stuff in class. In class I would want to learn how they made their spares and weapons. I hope I see one of the maori spares and weapons.

What I think about the new theme for this term I think it is pretty cool learning about staff. Because next year I wish it is the same thing.


Thursday, 6 April 2017

Viliami Eating Insects

Have you ever tasted a cricket before? This morning Mrs Stickland said we were going to eat chocolate flavoured mud with crickets. I thought she was lying! I was shocked when I saw it had eyes, I realised we were going to eat crickets. When I picked one up I felt a bit sick but I was brave enough to put it in my mouth. It was crunchy like corn flakes. I’m not sure how many I ate but it was a lot. I felt a little bit sick but luckily I ate it with nutella. I really liked that experience but next I want to try and eat scorpions.





Wednesday, 29 March 2017

Viliami Create your own Spider



The black and yellow

My spider can jump down and eat the bugs on the floor well the bugs are steal crawling.
My Spider lives in a web in a tree with it’s family. My insect hunts for bugs on the ground but his favorite is the weta . It’s behavior is bad so if the bugs is on the ground it well eat them.

Friday, 24 March 2017

Viliami Opinions Weta's


Lady bug.

WALT use interesting vocabulary in our writing.

Task description: Write a paragraph describing.

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The most common lady bug found world wide is red with black spots. It is small and has 6 little legs that it uses to scurry around. When a lady bug feels scared it plays dead, what a clever Idea!

Blessing bug


The blessing bug.

Black and yellow in the outside but brown in the in side. Its shape is a circle.

It has horns.

Its lives in a in a cross box.
It is kind but if you harm it it well hit it with it’s horns.




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Wednesday, 15 March 2017

Viliami Year 5/6 Camp Writing

Our leaders for our group called the amazing chiefs is Chastity and Tuipuia. I am about to write about our year 5&6 camp.  Camp is so cool because you get to do very cool activities. I

t started on Wednesday and went up till Friday, at school. The activities that we did was, Get lost, and playing stuff in the hall, and we did some kayaking as well, and last of all Killer zone. Killer zone isn’t as scary as it sounds. Well we did chuck water balloons at each other. It was awesome! Get lost was more like an amazing race with challengers, but it was really fun. We all had to sleep in a tent with 1-3 other people inside. The people sleeping with me in my tent were Loseti and Kohatu. We sneakily hid snacks from the teachers, and ate them at night.

My favorite parts is all of the actives that I did in three days. But my most favorite is the pools on Friday the pools on Friday was very cool because there is a volcano and there a booming area to. If you jump into the pool it is so cold because when I got back home I got sick.

I would like to say thank you to the teachers and the mums for making our wonderful food. We couldn't do it without you guys.I  felt so good at camp and I am looking forward to kawa island as well but I well give camp 100%.


Wednesday, 15 February 2017

Viliami Newspaper Towers.

WALT: write a recount about our experience.

Have you ever made a paper tower. Have you ever made your tower stand.

When we were told that we were going to do a experience with paper I thought that we were going to make a ball out of paper.

When our teacher sent us away we found our groups and we sat all together. Then we started planning. When we were planning and our teacher came around with some paper for our planning. We were doing a plan then someone was trying to be the boss and some of the kids from our group was doing nothing and just sitting there.Then they all sticked to my plan.

When built our newspaper tower we were all laughing when we were all making our paper tower. But all of got to have fun and enjoy.

I would like to say that it was so cool when we were doing the paper experience because I haven't done that in class be fore but it was so cool and luckily we got to it with our very cool teacher Mr Goodwin.


Task description:We made a paper tower. I wrote it down in paragraphs.

Thursday, 9 February 2017

Viliami chicken flavored worms.

WALT: write quality introductions.

Have you made a worm milk shake before? I wouldn't be surprised if we ate that tomorrow, because today he fed us with chicken flavoured worms.If this sounds good come on and keep reading he must be dreaming about worms.

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Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Task Description: In this lesson we did a writing experience to do with eating chicken flavored noodles and pretending the were worms. We wrote each sentence