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Tuesday, 19 September 2017

Viliami stardom recount.

Walt: write a recount with structure

On Thursday we went to stardom and I was really excited to go inside of it. When I was inside the bus I was happy because I was sitting next to my best friend Junior. Well my and Junior was sitting next to each other me and Junior was laughing and playing games.

 We were a bit early to stardom so we were all luckily because we all got to go play on the park. When the teachers said that we were allowed to go to the park I ran to the park so fast but I was too slow that I did not get the flying fox. So I waited and waited until I got my turn then I got my turn and I was happy.

 On the quiz I was so excited to get out of the room and go into our groups and get started. Then we got started and I was feeling happy. While we were doing the quiz we got stuck on some of the questions that we were going to answer. But luckily we got to finish the quiz.

 Then we went and watched a movie and we had to lie back on the chair because we were watching the movie on the sealing. While we were watching the movie I was feeling a little bit tired and I wanted to go to sleep but I just stayed up because the movie was so good that I did not want to mess it. But while I was sitting down on the chair I got a headache.

 I learnt about the planets and that the sun is the biggest and that is a star.

Task Description
We had to write a recount about our trip to the stardome. We had to use a variety of sentences and follow the plan that Mr Goodwin helped us with.

Tuesday, 5 September 2017

Viliami cross country.

Last friday we had our cross country fun run. Before our cross country we had to sit down on the hard court in our year lines. While we were waiting we were singing to the music that was playing.

My year was the last team to do our race. So Mr Jacobson said year 6 boys go to Mr Burt. When we were walking towards Mr Burt I was getting scared. But when Mr Burt did the clapper I didn't get scared anymore. I just did my best.

Well I was running I got tired and I wanted to stop running. I got a stitch and it was hard to breathe. I kept my pace and just jogged it. I kept on going no matter what happened. When I was running I was very thirsty. But I had to finish the race then I could have a drink of water.

I was 20 meters away from the finish line so I sprinted fast for my finish. When I ran past the finish line I was relieved that our cross country was finish. And know I don't have to think about the cross country again. And I am happy that I finished it.

In the end I was just happy that I finished it and I don't have to do it again. I just have to wait until next year but I will have to try a little bit better because it is going to be a little bit harder.

task description: I just had to write about what I did at the cross country.

Wednesday, 16 August 2017

Viliami picture book story.

My name is Viliami and I am sick of school. I want to go to out of space. I am going to make my own little space ship. I don't tell anyone where I am going and I just blast off.

10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 BLAST OFF.


Mercury is very close to the very big hot sun, in fact it's the 1st planet closest to the sun.. So this planet is so bad. So I'm blasting off, in my own little space ship.

Venus is a very Pretty color but it is just too hot for me. So I'm blasting off, in my own little space ship.

Earth is the 3rd planet. But i’m just gonna just drive past because I’m sick of my school on earth. I'm blasting off, in my own little space ship.Mars is the 5 planet is the solar system. And it is cold at night. So i'm blasting off in my little space ship.

Jupiter is the biggest planet in the solar system. But it is to stormy for me. So I'm blasting off in my little space ship.it is famous because of the ring of the ring around it.
Saturn is the sixth planet from the sun. Saturn has a gas giant. But I'm blasting off in my spaceship.

Uranus is cold and around the outside it is icey. It is too cold for me. So i'm blasting off in my little spaceship. Neptune is blue like the smooth sea. Neptune is cold as Ice and water from the sea.

Neptune is dark, cold and very windy. it's the last planet in our solar system. It is too cold so I'm blasting off in my little space ship.

I have to return back to earth because I miss school. So kids it is good to love school. I’ve traveled a lot of times so I have to go to earth because that's the only planet I have school at.

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