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Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Viliami in to the cave.

Once upon a time there were two boys and their names were Jack and Arthur. Jack and Arthur they went hunting at night. When they were walking through the bushes they saw a cave. They walked inside the cave and they saw a very big bear come out of the cave roaring at Jack and Arthur.

 Then suddenly the bear smashed the wall and made the rocks fall down then there was no where to go and they were trapped inside the cave. Then Jack said to Arthur that they were in trouble then then Jack got his gun out and held it in the front of his face then the bear was carm.

 Then Jack and Arthur said that the bear just wants to be there friend. Jack knew that there was meat in his bag. Then Jack gave it to the bear and the bear was there friend and Jack said to the bear if he can remove the rocks so they can get out then the bear removed the rocks.

Monday, 17 October 2016

Viliami The little boat.

Once upon a time there were two brothers that went fishing in the Tongan ocean. Then suddenly they saw ten sharks running round there fishing boat. Then one of the brothers new that there was a knife in the back of their boat so one of them went to the back of the boat and got the knife.

 Then he came to the front boat and and tried to scare them away well the other brother is trying to turn on the boat so they could get out of the circle. Suddenly the boat turned on so then the brother that was turning on the boat ran over the sharks and got out of circle.

 When they got back to shaw they said to each other that they are not going back fishing for there hole life. Back at home there parents said where's my fish and the two brothers said they got nothing.


Friday, 23 September 2016

Viliami end of term 3 Blog post.

Hi guys it's Viliami here. I hate it that I am not blogging and posting stuff on my blog but you can still post comments on my blog. The best thing that I liked posting this year was the egg race because it was so cool. I will see you next term so that well be in 2 weeks BYE.

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Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Viliami Writing - Narrative September 2016

Once upon a time there were a two brothers that went to the Point England beach for a swim and do some rugby training there names were Leonardy and Viliami. Then suddenly there were zombie people and zombie dogs.

 The zombie dogs were so fasted that it could chase you and bite you and there teeth are so sharp like a shark's teeth that have been sharpen. And the zombies they had blood coming out of there brains and zombies eating each others hands and feet and they are evan trying to eat each others brains to.

 So the brothers started runing away to there houses and they did not wanted to go back to the Point England beach for a swim or go training there so that's the end that they a going to the Point England school beach.

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.