Friday, 10 February 2017
Thursday, 9 February 2017
Viliami chicken flavored worms.
WALT: write quality introductions.
Have you made a worm milk shake before? I wouldn't be surprised if we ate that tomorrow, because today he fed us with chicken flavoured worms.If this sounds good come on and keep reading he must be dreaming about worms.

Introduction Rubric
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Hook
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My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
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My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
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My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
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When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
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Orientation
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My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
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My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
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My audience is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
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Task Description: In this lesson we did a writing experience to do with eating chicken flavored noodles and pretending the were worms. We wrote each sentence
Thursday, 1 December 2016
States of Matter
Viliami ch ch changes. from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
This is my movie about the 3 main states of matter.
Thursday, 17 November 2016
Viliami Athletics Day 2016.
On a good day we had a beautiful day and we had athletics. Spark,staff,youth town and kids that came to our school when they were young and that they go to tamaki college.
During the day on a sunny and hot day we had to sit down on the hot concert and in our house colours and our year groups. When we were sitting on the concert we had to listen to what Mr Brut told us to do to go to our rotations.
During the day on a sunny and hot day we had to sit down on the hot concert and in our house colours and our year groups. When we were sitting on the concert we had to listen to what Mr Brut told us to do to go to our rotations.
When we were walking towards the shot put I got Really nervous that I was going to not get a good fshot but I threw my first heavy ball but I stepped out of the circle. Then on the second throw I got a good throw but someone threw it past mine so I was lucky to get the last shot so I got so angry and I threw it hard that I almost broke my arm then I came first.
My favourite part at the athletics was the shot put because I came first.
Friday, 4 November 2016
Wednesday, 19 October 2016
Viliami in to the cave.
Once upon a time there were two boys and their names were Jack and Arthur. Jack and Arthur they went hunting at night. When they were walking through the bushes they saw a cave. They walked inside the cave and they saw a very big bear come out of the cave roaring at Jack and Arthur.
Then suddenly the bear smashed the wall and made the rocks fall down then there was no where to go and they were trapped inside the cave. Then Jack said to Arthur that they were in trouble then then Jack got his gun out and held it in the front of his face then the bear was carm.
Then Jack and Arthur said that the bear just wants to be there friend. Jack knew that there was meat in his bag. Then Jack gave it to the bear and the bear was there friend and Jack said to the bear if he can remove the rocks so they can get out then the bear removed the rocks.
Then suddenly the bear smashed the wall and made the rocks fall down then there was no where to go and they were trapped inside the cave. Then Jack said to Arthur that they were in trouble then then Jack got his gun out and held it in the front of his face then the bear was carm.
Then Jack and Arthur said that the bear just wants to be there friend. Jack knew that there was meat in his bag. Then Jack gave it to the bear and the bear was there friend and Jack said to the bear if he can remove the rocks so they can get out then the bear removed the rocks.
Monday, 17 October 2016
Viliami The little boat.
Once upon a time there were two brothers that went fishing in the Tongan ocean. Then suddenly they saw ten sharks running round there fishing boat. Then one of the brothers new that there was a knife in the back of their boat so one of them went to the back of the boat and got the knife.
Then he came to the front boat and and tried to scare them away well the other brother is trying to turn on the boat so they could get out of the circle. Suddenly the boat turned on so then the brother that was turning on the boat ran over the sharks and got out of circle.
When they got back to shaw they said to each other that they are not going back fishing for there hole life. Back at home there parents said where's my fish and the two brothers said they got nothing.
Then he came to the front boat and and tried to scare them away well the other brother is trying to turn on the boat so they could get out of the circle. Suddenly the boat turned on so then the brother that was turning on the boat ran over the sharks and got out of circle.
When they got back to shaw they said to each other that they are not going back fishing for there hole life. Back at home there parents said where's my fish and the two brothers said they got nothing.
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