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Tuesday, 30 June 2015

Viliami tearm 2 Writing sample.

On a friday there was a bouncy castle our houle class whent on the bouncy castle it was fun becuse When I whent on  it was so sofit and we had to claim up to the top of and it jump off from there.


Whean I jumped off it was so high that I clould rich the sky but I clouldint.

We onley get 2 truns so theis  was my last go so I jumped my highest to the end of the bouncy castle and I hit the side. And it was time to go back to class.

Thursday, 4 June 2015

Viliami switch story.

Walking along Mr Sam just finished his lunch and walked along lots of boxes and the boxes had  people inside.

Then there was this box that hit him on the forehead. He walked to go back and kick the box.
He saw a big grey box and ran to try and smash it but he couldn’t!So he tried again and he still couldn’t.

Next he climbed up lots of boxes and jumped off it and he didn't.


Then he saw a button under the grey box and pushed it and the alarm went on and turned off and there was a magnet  that pulled him to the box and the box made him into a box and we saw his cothcs and it diserped into a wigth box…...

Friday, 29 May 2015

The Marshmallow Story.

On a cloudy starless night a young boy, named Jimmy sat alone by a bonfire. Jimmy was sitting on a big wooden log and toasting his marshmallows over the bonfire. He was camping all on his own.

 When he turned around he saw a monster behind him. Oh no, Jimmy felt nervous and frightened. The monster was angry.He was green with big yellow eyes and sharp, pointy teeth.

 Trying to defend himself Jimmy swung his stick like it was a sword at the monster. Surprisingly, the monster transformed into a cute dog.The monster performed tricks like jumping up and down. Suddenly Jimmy released that he only had one marshmallow left.

 Jimmy took the last marshmallow out of the packet.When he took it out, the monster snatched the last marshmallow. The monster began to chase Jimmy into the forest. When the monster eat the last marshmallow Jimmy looked inside the packet if there are any more.

 And when he looked inside there were no more Marshmallows left. and the monster got angry at Jimmy.and chased him to the forest and jimmy got back up and get the pillow.Ten he got the pillow he thought  it was a marshmallow but it wasn't.And he walked to the bonfire and sit down Next to the bonfire and it disappeared  and it was really sad.THE END.