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Showing posts with label Ms Stickland. Show all posts

Friday, 11 August 2017

Viliami Kind.




Task description: It is good to be kind because it is good for the people feelings and it is good to be kind. Some people can show kindness by helping people. they can look after people. And they can share because sharing is caring.

Thursday, 27 July 2017

Viliami Space Narrative.

On 4017 me and Junior moved to another planet because the earth was dieing. And it was started to get worse. Because the plants were dying and some to the people in the earth was dieing.

Arriving at our new planet the tiger planet it was scary because there was lots of tigers surrounding. So I had to run. Then I had an Idea I remembered that I had steak in my bag. So I gave him one then he liked it. I fed the tiger that all the steak in my bag that we were going to cook was all finished.

When I ran out of meat I started to get nervous and started shaking. So the tigers started chasing me and I jumped onto my rocket ship and tried to get away but I could not get away. Because the tigers ran and jumped and was on top of our rocket ship. So I knew that there is going to be big trouble.

When the tiger was on top of the roof me and junior climb on top of the rocket and pushed the tigers off the rocket ship. Then we said goodbye to the tigers well they were floating in the air.

After saying goodbye to the tigers Junior and I lived in peace in tiger land. That we had tiger ice cream. And we had fun.



Thursday, 6 April 2017

Viliami Eating Insects

Have you ever tasted a cricket before? This morning Mrs Stickland said we were going to eat chocolate flavoured mud with crickets. I thought she was lying! I was shocked when I saw it had eyes, I realised we were going to eat crickets. When I picked one up I felt a bit sick but I was brave enough to put it in my mouth. It was crunchy like corn flakes. I’m not sure how many I ate but it was a lot. I felt a little bit sick but luckily I ate it with nutella. I really liked that experience but next I want to try and eat scorpions.





Thursday, 9 February 2017

Viliami chicken flavored worms.

WALT: write quality introductions.

Have you made a worm milk shake before? I wouldn't be surprised if we ate that tomorrow, because today he fed us with chicken flavoured worms.If this sounds good come on and keep reading he must be dreaming about worms.

Image result for cooked worms
Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Task Description: In this lesson we did a writing experience to do with eating chicken flavored noodles and pretending the were worms. We wrote each sentence